Ielts Writing

In all over the world, especially those developed, boor obesity becomes a serious issue and nearly of the pargonnts meet find it insurmountable. In fact, causes of child obesity are traceable. First, is the habit of eating toss out food. We can easily reach a McDonalds or KFC on the highway in the developed world like U. S. and be exposed to Coca Cola and Pepsis advertisements. Children always want something taste good regardless(prenominal) of their nutrition nor fats.Parents unremarkably ask their children to father fewer cans of coke while keep buying a dozen of cans home. Unless the parents play a more active role to abet change their childrens eating habit. Otherwise, obesity seems to be an unending problem. Secondly, a lack of physical exercise does matter. Children in developed world are generally wealthier. approximately of the time they may be busy in playing play station and sitting down all day. The plainly exercise that they do are walk to the fringe to get a ca n of coke or to the toilet.They rarely go out for a walk. Although there is PE lesson in school, children have it only once a week, which is far to effective. The raise of internet also leads to the above problem, as quite a lot of children have been addicted to some affable network or Apps on mobile. The effects come along the obesity hurt not only the physical health but also the mental health of the obese child. Obesity can lead to heart related diseases. Once the children get overweight, they can hardly do any exercise because their spacious body.When they grow older, they may start suffering from low self-esteem since they care more about their own appearance and their weight may become a joke. This worsen the obesity problem as some of them may not want to get out of the house any more. It is understandable that children are of less self-control. So to cure obesity, parents, teachers and government ought to share the responsibilities. Parents should take the initiative to s top their child from having too much junk food. Teachers can tell the students what are junk food s cons while the schools should provide healthier lunch.Read also Principles of Good Writing by L.A. HillThe government can put a limit on the amount of soft drinks and junk food advertisement as well as promote the pros of having regular exercises, building more facilities for public to enjoy doing exercises. To conclude, child obesity in developed world is not uncommon, the main reason is people become lazier when the society and technology become advanced. Both of parents, teachers and government have to by all means help the children to build up a good eating habit since they are the future of the society and health is the most valuable thing to them.